The Corruption of Erin (Part 2)

Thanks for your patience, readers! It's going to take me a little while to get back into the swing of things, but people have been bugging me to continue, so let's get a little further into the story, shall we?


Erin ran up to her room excitedly. She always loved evenings with her friends. She tore through her dresser.... she found a pair of long, light-skin toned leggings, a short red skirt, and a white button-up shirt. She looked in the mirror, her hand running down her side. Damn she looked hot. She ran into her bathroom and threw on some makeup. One of the many talents of an eighteen-year-old all-American blonde... she could throw on makeup with one hand tied behind her back and in the dark.

Erin went through the rest of her day in extreme boredom, just waiting to leave and hang out with her friends. Darkness was just starting to fall when she started walking. She knew that there might be a little drinking, so she decided to drive. It was an odd bit of responsibility for a teenager, but then Erin always was kinda' plain. She knew what the possible end would be, and she liked partying way too much to lose the ability to ever drive again.

The night was, of course, extremely entertaining. There was a little bit of drinking, but Erin mostly felt with it by the end. Erin took off for the train station, it must have been a little after midnight. Her family lived in the suburbs of a major city, and one of the big benefits was having a great public transportation system readily available.

Erin threw a token in and walked straight into a waiting train car. She breathed a subconscious sigh of relief to discover that it was empty. Riding a train as a teenage girl, alone, in the middle of the night, was a needlessly risky move, but she wanted to get home and a taxi was just way too expensive for the distance that she had to cover.

Her relief was short lived, however, as a young couple stepped onto the train at the last minute and stared straight at her. Something about the drunken look in their eyes gave her a bad feeling.